REWRITTEN ROMANCE
Chapter 4
Consciousness returned in fragments.
Sophia drifted between waking and darkness, her mind hazy, her thoughts disjointed. Pain no longer screamed-it pressed, constant and suffocating, like the weight of deep water. Each breath felt borrowed. Each heartbeat felt uncertain.
She couldn't open her eyes.
Couldn't move.
But she could hear.
Voices slipped through the fog, distant at first, then gradually clearer-sharp enough to cut.
"...the swelling hasn't gone down."
"That's normal after trauma."
"She's still not responding."
Sophia wanted to scream I'm here. She wanted to tell them she could hear every word. But her lips wouldn't part. Her body refused to obey.
Footsteps approached.
She recognized them immediately.
Andrew.
Her heart stuttered, then surged painfully against her ribs.
He came back, she thought weakly. Maybe... maybe I was wrong.
Hope-foolish, fragile-lifted its head one last time.
The curtain rustled softly as someone stepped closer to her bed. She felt movement near her hand, a presence looming just out of reach.
Andrew sighed.
Not in relief.
Not in fear.
In irritation.
"How long is this going to take?" he asked.
Sophia's breath caught.
The doctor replied carefully, "We're monitoring her condition hour by hour. She's stable for now, but-"
"But what?" Andrew interrupted.
"There's internal damage we can't fully assess yet. And neurologically..." The doctor hesitated. "Even if she wakes up, there's a chance she won't fully recover."
Silence followed.
Sophia's heart hammered wildly.
Wake up, she begged herself. Please. Just open your eyes.
Andrew spoke again, his voice low, calculating.
"And if she doesn't wake up at all?"
The doctor's tone hardened. "Sir, this is your wife."
Andrew exhaled slowly. "I know. I just need clarity."
Clarity.
The word echoed painfully in Sophia's mind.
"If the worst happens," Andrew continued, "there won't be complications with the assets, right?"
Assets.
Her chest tightened so sharply she thought her heart might rupture.
The doctor paused. "Legally, as her spouse, you are the primary beneficiary, yes. But I don't feel comfortable discussing-"
"That's all I needed," Andrew said. "Thank you."
His footsteps retreated.
Sophia felt something inside her collapse completely.
The last fragile strand holding her heart together snapped.
So that's it, she thought. I'm not a person to him. I'm an outcome.
She remembered all the times she had defended him.
Andrew isn't like that.
He just needs time.
He loves me in his own way.
The lies tasted bitter now.
Her chest trembled with silent sobs she couldn't release.
Minutes passed. Or hours.
She didn't know.
She only knew that something essential inside her was dying.
Later-much later-she felt another presence.
This one was different.
Quiet.
Careful.
Someone pulled a chair closer to her bed. The sound was soft, hesitant, as if they were afraid of disturbing her.
A familiar voice spoke gently.
"Sophia."
Her heart reacted before her mind did.
Daniel.
"I know you can't answer," he said quietly. "But I'm here."
She felt warmth near her hand again-steady, grounding. His fingers didn't grip hers tightly. They simply rested there, as if asking permission.
"I'm sorry I wasn't there sooner," Daniel continued, his voice thick with emotion. "I should've said something. I should've stopped you."
Stopped her.
Tears slipped from the corners of Sophia's eyes, unnoticed by anyone but him.
Daniel noticed.
His breath caught.
"You're crying," he whispered. "You can hear me, can't you?"
He leaned closer, his voice trembling now.
"I don't know what you heard," he said carefully. "But please-please don't give up. You deserve more than this. More than him."
I know, she wanted to say. I know now.
Daniel's hand tightened around hers, just slightly.
"You don't have to be strong," he murmured. "Not anymore."
A sharp pain bloomed in her chest.
If only I had listened to you, she thought. If only I had looked at you instead.
Her memories spilled out uncontrollably.
Daniel standing at the back of the classroom, always watching quietly.
Daniel walking her home when Andrew forgot.
Daniel showing up at the hospital when she was sick-alone.
She had seen him.
She had simply chosen not to.
Regret flooded her, heavy and suffocating.
"I'll stay," Daniel said. "As long as it takes."
The machines beeped steadily, indifferent to her internal collapse.
Sophia's consciousness wavered.
Darkness pressed in again.
But this time, it wasn't peaceful.
She dreamed.
Or perhaps she remembered.
She saw herself standing at a crossroads-two paths stretching endlessly in opposite directions.
On one path stood Andrew, smiling the way he always did in public. Behind him, shadows twisted and coiled, reaching greedily toward her.
On the other path stood Daniel.
He didn't smile.
He simply waited.
She took a step toward Andrew.
The ground beneath her feet cracked.
She fell.
Pain surged violently through her body.
The machines around her erupted in frantic beeping.
"BP's dropping!"
"We're losing her!"
Hands moved urgently around her. Voices overlapped. Orders were shouted.
Sophia felt herself slipping.
Her thoughts scattered like leaves in a storm.
So this is how it ends, she thought faintly. I loved him... and it killed me.
A sudden pressure enveloped her hand.
Daniel.
"Don't go," he pleaded softly, his voice breaking. "Please."
She wanted to answer him.
She wanted to tell him the truth-that she was sorry, that she saw him now, that if she could live again, she would choose differently.
But the words stayed locked inside her chest.
Her heartbeat slowed.
The pain dulled.
A strange calm settled over her, heavy and final.
Her last thought wasn't of Andrew.
It was of a younger version of herself-standing at the beginning of everything, unaware of the mistakes waiting ahead.
If I could go back, she thought, fading, I would never love him again.
The world went silent.
Flat.
Dark.
Then-
Light.
A sharp inhale tore through her chest.
Sophia gasped, eyes flying open.
The sterile white of the hospital vanished.
Instead, she stared at a familiar ceiling-faint cracks near the corner, a glow-in-the-dark star she hadn't removed in years.
Her dorm room.
Her university dorm room.
Her hands flew to her chest, her heart pounding wildly beneath her palms.
She was breathing.
Alive.
Young.
Unmarried.
Tears streamed down her face as realization crashed over her.
She had died.
And somehow-
She had been given another chance.
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